tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post4344352920677310685..comments2024-03-05T11:26:21.204-06:00Comments on All the World's Our Page: NaNo Weekend Wrap- Week 3Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-29791124979367694362010-11-20T13:59:53.369-06:002010-11-20T13:59:53.369-06:00Ooh Kristen, that was delightful. Love the line &q...Ooh Kristen, that was delightful. Love the line "That round puff of sin." and his satisfaction at thinking 'I did that'. More please [g]Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-52024944336502869862010-11-20T13:56:03.315-06:002010-11-20T13:56:03.315-06:00And your own last line - of Len looking back. Ahhh...And your own last line - of Len looking back. Ahhh... it's for feelings like that that I read these war stories.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-65350216123898424812010-11-20T13:53:24.796-06:002010-11-20T13:53:24.796-06:00That is one chilling paragraph, especially this li...That is one chilling paragraph, especially this line "to do so, not as they would will, but in the way they were told and on a battlefield where they and their strength would be but as a bucketful of water poured into a river."Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-25886285051735997272010-11-20T13:46:09.602-06:002010-11-20T13:46:09.602-06:00Oh Susan - I forgot to share this with you: http:/...Oh Susan - I forgot to share this with you: http://inkyfool.blogspot.com/2010/11/hooch-and-moonshine.htmlDeniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.com