tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post152192127119404046..comments2024-03-05T11:26:21.204-06:00Comments on All the World's Our Page: Blood of the Heart ExcerptUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-3298842898617685532009-11-01T02:34:03.743-06:002009-11-01T02:34:03.743-06:00I love Isabel and Skelton- she is such a classic h...I love Isabel and Skelton- she is such a classic heroine, ready to seize the moment (and the chamberpot!) when necessary and unwilling to let any old slimeball get in her way. Go Isabel!<br /><br />And Phillipe must be about the creepiest, most vivid villain I've read in an extremely long time. Quite possibly ever. You have a lot of gems here.Claire Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15286952159573145712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-65000045263528706502009-10-24T02:10:22.991-05:002009-10-24T02:10:22.991-05:00Thanks for your comments, guys! They really do spu...Thanks for your comments, guys! They really do spur me on to finish this draft ASAP.<br /><br />Deniz - that scene might not be my opening any longer. I've had another idea ... but I'm not going to do anything about it until I've finished this draft, or I'll get caught up in one of my never ending, re-writing spirals of death. (g) Must. Resist!Rachel Walshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15406943046329566026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-42859831088001616872009-10-22T21:34:39.477-05:002009-10-22T21:34:39.477-05:00Me. Want. More. Phillipe. :) He's AWESOME -- ...Me. Want. More. Phillipe. :) He's AWESOME -- freaky as all get out. (g)<br /><br />Wonderful snips!!! Hurry. FINISH!Jennifer Hendrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01239194419535919631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-48651758294669275132009-10-22T10:33:29.310-05:002009-10-22T10:33:29.310-05:00Wooo Rachel! Love the momentum and your similes an...Wooo Rachel! Love the momentum and your similes and metaphors! Brilliant image too, of wielding a knife and a chamber pot :-)<br />Is Philippe's scene still your opening? So mysterious and tantalising at the same time, especially the "He pulled back his lips into a smile" and him having to remember to smile - right away the reader knows he's not what he seems, but what exactly is lurking beneath the surface? Shivers!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2274987097756433491.post-88918617907817592552009-10-22T10:26:43.280-05:002009-10-22T10:26:43.280-05:00Ooh, so good! I love Skelton's voice. A right ...Ooh, so good! I love Skelton's voice. A right dirty bastard, that guy! :) And Philippe is too creepy! Yay, Rachel! I love reading your stuff!Kristen Callihanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01448274676402616525noreply@blogger.com